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Friday, November 19, 2010
Variety of Feelings
Scared of walking alone
Frightened of being flown
Because of what you’ve blown
Dignified by your word
Busted by your action
Because you left me on board
A blissful soul came
To calm and tame
Now a start of flame
Burn the pain
Erase the scars I gain
Clean me up to vain
Revive me from dying
Save me from sinking
Flee me from bursting
Now glad to be free
For you embrace me with glee
For the bliss has arrive
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fantastic rhymes,
ReplyDeletesmart poem,
Thanks for sharing.
xx
Feelings so well put in these lines!
ReplyDeleteSo much emotion in these words...beautiful.
ReplyDeletekeep it up.
ReplyDeleteNicely posed!
ReplyDeletenice movement to this piece. life is interesting this way.
ReplyDeleteA moving poem. Nice work! Thank you. :-)
ReplyDeletethank you too guys
ReplyDeletethe rhyming adds a lot of power to a wonderful poem...
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