Wednesday, November 17, 2010

The View of Reality

And after 5 years.... I found out the stupid answers...May be people were destined to feel and experienced those things as a part of growing up....


The Heartrending Answers

My guts were not enough for you to stay
For you are flying so high that causes me to stray
It leads me not to our reverie of blue moon
And I was thrown so hard in the black hole at noon

If you go for it, go all the way that’s what I say
So I follow the path that where you may lay
This leads me to my devastating nightmare
That brought me pain, and sufferings that I bear

I became happy with you the moment I flout
But only a glimpse and suddenly burst out
The idyllic forever of us is only an imagination
And I was awakened by your stupid rejection

All my queries were answered after the separation
For our ending is like a bitter sensation
For when the sunset begins the moon starts to mount
To let the sun knows she was destined to be left out

Pal, you can check out The Questions, a poem I made 5 years ago....

15 comments:

  1. My guts were not enough for you to stay
    For you are flying so high that causes me to stray
    It leads me not to our reverie of blue moon
    And I was thrown so hard in the black hole at noon

    I like it,
    beautiful writing.
    Thanks for sharing...
    you did alright.

    if you can answer the 7 questions, things will be more clear to me...

    do you accept the perfect poet award?
    do you wish your poem to be published at promising poets parking lot?

    have fun!

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  2. Yes I accept..But don't know where to answer the questions...
    Thanks for appreciating my poem...
    and also for the help

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  3. very sad, but a fascinating read!
    Happy rally!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/dark-severance/

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  4. Sad and bitter poem, but with lovely lines:
    "It leads me not to our reverie of blue moon
    And I was thrown so hard in the black hole at noon"

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  5. Some folks rape the flesh, but rejection, especially when you care so deeply for a person, rapes the mind, and scars the soul.

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  6. Such deep emotions here. I don't know anyone who cannot relate to what you have written.

    So compelling.

    THANK YOU!

    Read my poem here.

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  7. A great piece, sharp words that don't mask the rawness

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  8. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/agreement-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-33-participants/

    here is the link for you to read and answer questions, thanks for the attention.

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  9. Sounds like difficult lessoned learned and insight gained. Nicely written.

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/jingles-poetry-rally-thanksgiving/

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  10. Blog friends....thanks for appreciating my work

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  11. beautiful expression.. a lesson for insight..

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  12. You have a talent for words expressed well.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thankfulness/

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