And after 5 years.... I found out the stupid answers...May be people were destined to feel and experienced those things as a part of growing up....
The Heartrending Answers
My guts were not enough for you to stay
For you are flying so high that causes me to stray
It leads me not to our reverie of blue moon
And I was thrown so hard in the black hole at noon
If you go for it, go all the way that’s what I say
So I follow the path that where you may lay
This leads me to my devastating nightmare
That brought me pain, and sufferings that I bear
I became happy with you the moment I flout
But only a glimpse and suddenly burst out
The idyllic forever of us is only an imagination
And I was awakened by your stupid rejection
All my queries were answered after the separation
For our ending is like a bitter sensation
For when the sunset begins the moon starts to mount
To let the sun knows she was destined to be left out
My guts were not enough for you to stay
ReplyDeleteFor you are flying so high that causes me to stray
It leads me not to our reverie of blue moon
And I was thrown so hard in the black hole at noon
I like it,
beautiful writing.
Thanks for sharing...
you did alright.
if you can answer the 7 questions, things will be more clear to me...
do you accept the perfect poet award?
do you wish your poem to be published at promising poets parking lot?
have fun!
Yes I accept..But don't know where to answer the questions...
ReplyDeleteThanks for appreciating my poem...
and also for the help
very sad, but a fascinating read!
ReplyDeleteHappy rally!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/dark-severance/
Sad and bitter poem, but with lovely lines:
ReplyDelete"It leads me not to our reverie of blue moon
And I was thrown so hard in the black hole at noon"
interesting write!
ReplyDeleteSome folks rape the flesh, but rejection, especially when you care so deeply for a person, rapes the mind, and scars the soul.
ReplyDeleteGood one!
ReplyDeleteSuch deep emotions here. I don't know anyone who cannot relate to what you have written.
ReplyDeleteSo compelling.
THANK YOU!
Read my poem here.
great emotive piece. nice job!
ReplyDeleteA great piece, sharp words that don't mask the rawness
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ReplyDeletehere is the link for you to read and answer questions, thanks for the attention.
Sounds like difficult lessoned learned and insight gained. Nicely written.
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Blog friends....thanks for appreciating my work
ReplyDeletebeautiful expression.. a lesson for insight..
ReplyDeleteYou have a talent for words expressed well.
ReplyDeleteJP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thankfulness/