Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Chase

Drowning in the oceans of love
Chasing your life like a dove
Flown by the waves of lies
...Lifeless in the mid of ice

Struggling in the dessert of dreams
restless of finding the oasis of beam
Chasing the glimpse that you aim
In the hot nowhere of flame

Chase the cloud of happiness
to reach the peak of sageness
Fly in the space of contentment
To grasps the wind of fullfillment

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Posted by haisley at 6:58 AM
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14 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM

    i love "DEPARTURE"...i really like it...may kurot haayyyy.....

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  2. haisleyAugust 17, 2010 at 8:25 AM

    i really love that poem.....heheheeh...miss u Fei hong....la....

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 22, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    lovely flow...

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  4. ClaudiaSeptember 22, 2010 at 10:46 AM

    yes - sometimes love can feel like an ocean we gladly would love to drown in..

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  5. Brian MillerSeptember 22, 2010 at 4:45 PM

    nice...love the nature touches in this...love is a mountain i gladly climb and an ocena i gladly swim...nice one shot

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  6. UnknownSeptember 22, 2010 at 8:13 PM

    Ah, the imagery...I love nature imagery. Great poem!

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  7. Shashidhar SharmaSeptember 23, 2010 at 5:15 AM

    Flown by the waves of lies...
    Good one ... I enjoyed reading it... thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Connect with me on Twitter at @VerseEveryDay to read one verse everyday on life, love and longing...

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  8. MarshySeptember 25, 2010 at 12:33 PM

    i have been so late in my comments this week but just wanted to say this was a very well written poem with a wonderfully strong last stanza...thanks for sharing with one shot and look forward to seeing you again next week...cheers pete

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  9. haisleySeptember 28, 2010 at 12:11 AM

    thanks la!!!!

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 6, 2010 at 10:30 AM

    elegant piece.
    Thanks for sharing...
    Happy Rally week 34.
    let me know after you are done 18 visiting.

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  11. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 6:37 PM

    Good use of nature to carry the message. Well done. Happy Rally days. Hope you are enjoying your visitors and visits.

    Jamie Dedes

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  12. AnonymousDecember 6, 2010 at 9:51 PM

    It is good to know there are other seekers of sageness. LOVE this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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  13. Travel with Chamz ChamenDecember 10, 2010 at 6:47 AM

    nice piece. :)

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  14. Sam373December 22, 2010 at 2:11 AM

    Welcome Kindred Spirit. Thanks for sharing with me. Let us make this reality the fantasy it can be while comprehending the difference.

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