Friday, September 17, 2010

How to Express your Love in a Distance by Poem

A long distance relationship is difficult. I wrote a poem for bri during the time that I really miss him.

The Lonely Days
It was an empty space of uncertainties
Full of regrets and insecurities
A year of aloneness and loneliness
With hundred times of tears and bluntness

I know your presence lingers my soul
My farness breaks me whole
No matter how much you reach me through
Still I fill incompletely lost in thought

I’ve tried my best to change for you
Make a thousand promises not to hurt you
Extend my limits of understanding you
Coz in my life my existence is coz by you

I want to embrace you more than the way you do
Give you warm as much as you can give me too
To completely surrender my whole life to you
And love you endlessly this I promise you



  1. How romantic. I loved it!

  2. The ecstasy of innocence and young hearts. Beautiful!

  3. lovely.. mines here -

  4. I can so relate. I know what it's like to be thousands of miles away from your love. I can definitely understand the yearning and loneliness expressed in your poem.

  5. Not all people survive long distance relationships. I have been through one and believe me, this captures what one feels being on it. Great work.

    Happy Holidays,


  6. love your honesty and expression