Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Temptations of Nowhere


Ignore the forces that is pulling you
To the gravity of nowhere
For the core of hell is ahead of you
If you pursue the way of nowhere

Don’t try to make a step
To find your feet stuck of nowhere
For turning back is a steep of gaffe
That will bring a gloomy nowhere

Don’t seek for the peccadillo’s hand
That will show you the hot nowhere
For it will brought you a sorrow’s land
Filled with insecurities of nowhere

Fight the temptations of having it
For it was a dream of nowhere
A precedent satisfaction of your merit
That was now a disastrous world of nowhere 

Try Crossroads..... And have a wonderful journey with me
__Chase your life...come to my word
or try my to Depart and enjoy the rides of poetry

12 comments:

  1. A profound reflection on the world of nowhere and it's magnetic pull

    thanks for sharing with One shot

    Moon smiles

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  2. A dream of nowhere... so beautiful. I liked it so much.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  3. whew...yeah...a nice foreboding...and an easy place to slips....nice one shot!

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  4. lovely entry,
    welcome to JP potluck..
    dynamic word flow,
    Thanks for sharing.
    xxx

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  5. The pulling forces of nowhere and their driving forces. nice write.

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  6. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/

    awards 4 u...
    Happy Wednesday.
    xx

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  7. Somehow the nowhere seems to be so alluring, doesn't it? This was a really intriguing poem.

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  8. nowhere is a dangerous place to be...a thought provoking write

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  9. Nice One Shot.

    (For a real peccadillo, go read mine!)

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  10. great piece. works on many levels. excellent choice in language. good job!

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  11. Its great to revisit this beautiful verse again through the One Shot. Liked it so much...


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  12. We know of its monstrosities, and yet we are so attracted to the lures of nowhere, aren't we?!
    A beautiful and deeply thought provoking poem, Haisley!
    Really liked it a lot!

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