I see you here in this simple place
We shared our laughs and haste
We talk,and talk and talk
And walk and walk and walk
I find you as an angel from up above
Or may be an alien from mars above
That send me coffee in the beautiful morning
Or gave nice smile that makes the day worth fulfilling
Now it’s time to depart from endless talking
And bid goodbye to the free coffee
But most of all its time to say thank you
To the most precious person that I ever met
To say how greatful I am for meeting you
How happy I am for having you
Cause you are my lovely friend
That I will treasure until the end
It is about parting from a friend yet there is no bitterness. Well written.
ReplyDeletesweet and cheerful piece.
ReplyDeleteTHAT'S the way it should end. Detachment, it's called. But no bitterness, guilt, shame, hatred. Sounds like a real experience. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteGOOD One-Shot.
Thanks guys...yeah!!!its a real experience......
ReplyDeleteNicely written!
ReplyDeleteSo sweet! A poem about friendship, filled with heart.
ReplyDeleteReally nice, what lovely sentiments you have expressed here. :-)
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Beautiful friend... enjoyed the friendship journey with you...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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hi ya...very late on my one stop reading this week..but i always stop by and wanted to thank you for sharing this wonderful verse over a cup of coffee with me..cheers pete
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