Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Shamevonipa

Shadows,
Stop following
For I’m tired or running
Let me escaped you
For I’m nearly dying


Memories
Stop reminding me
For I’m sick of thinking
Detach from my mind
For your virus is infecting

Voices
Sealed your mouth
Your screamed is threatening
Now stop whisperings
Words that are deadly

Nightmare
Stop killing me
For I’m trying to revive again
Get out of my sleep
And let me rest for sometime

Past
Stop blocking my way
For I want to move ahead
Stop clinging to my soul
For I hate to be a part of you anymore
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9 comments:

  1. Oh if it were only that simple to have it all stop - well done

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  2. Now that would be a nightmare. What a descriptive picture that weaves through your poem

    Nicely done for One Shot

    thanks from the Moon

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  3. stop following...stop reminding...stop whispering
    ...stop killing...stop blocking. So many things to stop in a world always on the go.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  4. Wouldn't I love to be able to shut off my thoughts, my dreams in the night as easily as telling them to stop reminding me.

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  5. thanksfully i have been blessed with being able to control my dreams...a great share cheers pete

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  6. yeah - it's good if we don't let us stop by our past and move ahead...thanks for sharing this

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  7. Nightmare's get out of my sleep... I enjoyed it...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  8. Well-written, structure-true, relatable work.

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  9. Oh, Haisley, I really loved this poem. I've felt this way - like I'd like to remove my head for a few hours just to have some mental peace and quiet. You captured that perfectly!

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